The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

The table depicts the number of male and female employees and industrial units in two different nations between 1851 and 1901. The maximum number of male’s workers
were employed
was employed
in 1851 approximately more than 2
a body of (usually fresh) water surrounded by land
and it had fallen each year and reached up to 31,000 at the end of the period.
, the female employees were almost half less than the male count in 1851 and decline every ten years and attained 30,000 in 1901. In 1851, there were 225 factories occupied in both national and
it marginally increases by two counts in within 10 years, after that it escalated substantially to reach a peak of 721 in 1881. Significantly, it was tapering off to almost by 121 counts within 20 years. Overall, it is clear that the number of male workers was higher than that of female workers throughout the given period.
the factories growth was improving
every year, the employment count for both genders was seemed to be
in every given period.
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