The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
The table depicts the number of male and female employees and industrial units in two different nations between 1851 and 1901.
The maximum number of
male’s
workers was employed in 1851 approximately more than 2 lakhs and it had fallen each year and reached up to 31,000 Change noun form
male
at the end
of the period. Likewise
, the female employees were almost half less than the male count in an
initial year and decline every ten years and attained 30,000 in 1901.
In 1851, there were 225 factories occupied in both national and Correct article usage
the
then
it marginally increases
by two counts within 10 years, after that it escalated substantially to reach a peak of 721 in 1881. Significantly, it was tapering off to almost Wrong verb form
increased
by
121 counts within 20 years.
Change preposition
apply
Overall
, it is clear that
the number of male workers was higher than that of female workers throughout the given period. Although
the factories
growth was improving with every year, the employment count for both genders Change noun form
factory's
factories'
was
seemed to be declining.Unnecessary verb
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