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People tend to work longer hours nowadays. Working long hours has a negative effect on themselves, their families and the society, so working hours should be restricted. Do you agree or disagree?

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In today's society, more and more workers extended hours for working and that brings too much effected on themselves
,
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,
 their families and the communities. I totally agree that hours working should be limited. In some decades ago, the average daily working hours
was
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were
 completely lower than the present so it did not have a huge effect on an individual worker. But now, the employees are facing with serious problems, especially their health when they work so much. My friend,
for example
, who
are now running
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is now running
 a Clothes Company,
are suffering
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is suffering
 from anxiety disorders because of extended hours working. Most employees who work more than 14 hours per day will fatigue to more serious problems like sick leave, anxiety disorders or even stoke. Not only individual worker
are affected
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is affected
 when working so
much but
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much, but
also
 their families and society are affected too. The
first
 problem is that exhausted employees bring low productivity and the
economics
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economic
 foundation will be significant went down. Another problem is it has serious consequences for
family relationship
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family relationships
a family relationship
. Each member in
family
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the family
a family
 just has a little time to
built
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build
 up the relationship and
that is
 never enough to have a close-knit family. In conclusion, nowadays working extended hours is becoming popular
,
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,
 especially in developed nations.
This
 trend brings so much serious consequences not only for
themselves but
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themselves, but
also
 for the relatives and community. I personally support that time working should be limited by government.
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