People attend colleges or universities for many different reasons (for example, new experiences, career preparation, increased knowledge etc.). Why do you think people attend colleges or universities?

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go
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college
and universities for several purposes as for new experiences, Career preparation and so on.
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an educational institution
an Educational institution
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improve
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improving
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reasons
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college
and university there goes three types of people
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the first type
of people goes there for studying,
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but not the least who teach student they
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Most of the people who
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college
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education. I can see the main reason of going to
college
are University is learning In conclusion I can say that I think people go to
college
and in adversity is for learning and
also
can say that they goes there to become a good human being
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