Nowadays some professionals such as doctors, lawyers and engineers are paid much higher than ordinary workers. What do you think of this trend? Are there any jobs which you think should offer higher salaries?
The people wonder why some employees get more salary than others.
This
question divides these people into two campuses, the proponent said and the opponent
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opponent's
side
. The supportive side
says that these employees spent their life to become an old hand in their field, so they should receive some financial appreciation. The other side
sees this
is a type of discrimination against blue-collar jobs. It seems clear that there are reasons behind this
situation coming through several rationale aspects relateing
to their skills and majors.
make a logical or causal connection
relating
relation
Firstly
, it is not surprising that in comparison with laborer
, white-collar jobs get a higher an income for logical reasons. someone who works with their hands; someone engaged in manual labor
labourer
labourers
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reason, if they faced problem
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the problem
Moreover
, there is a competition among companies to hire these type of people, so this
competition increases a demand for this
type of worker. That leads their salaries to become a high. This
can explain by saying that according to law
of demand, if the demand is high, the price increases. Suggestion
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When
this
happens, the world will suffer from insufficient of the doctors and the engineers. Consequently
, it would cause to health issues, and destroy an industrial developemet
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opposite
side
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On the other hand
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jobs are neglected financially, and not the same one or ones already mentioned or implied
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low salaries. Even though these jobs play an intrinsic role in our country, these did not get efficient money. the act of acquiring something
getting
For example
, the teacher who care about bringing up the next
generation works twice. He works in his school to explain for
his students, and he squanders his time in his house in order to prepare his classes.
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by several notions understood in a certain way; made sense of
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However
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salary
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