Computers are now the basis of the modern world. They should, therefore, be introduced into classrooms, and their programs used for direct teaching purposes. However, dependence on computers in teaching may carry a certain degree of risk to students. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

University is a completely new learning environment,
therefore
, students have to change their learning methods if they do not want to lose any learning materials. Due to
this
,
this
paragraph is about to recommend a learning method that would be
favorable
encouraging or approving or pleasing
favourable
for students to follow. The suggested method is self-studying. Self-studying is the capacity to learn on your own. After class attendant, students get a lot of spare time for self-studying and student
had better spend
Suggestion
had better spent
at least 2
hours
Suggestion
hour
self-study for each subject at school. The most ideal time for self-studying is about 7.00 PM to 11.00 PM. How should students self¬-study?
To begin
with, they have to review all the knowledge acquired at school. They should highlight significant
information
, write it again in a new small notebook, so, they can find it without any efforts when they get stuck.
This
small notebook should be
stick
Suggestion
stuck
by them all the time they learn. The
next
step is, students have to prepare
information
for the
next
lessons. They should read the lessons
first
,
then
underline the
information
considered vital. They should
also
make some questions to ask the teachers at school. With the aforementioned
information
, I hope students will have a new effective learning method
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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