Imagine that a company plans to build an industry in your hometown. Discuss the factory might improve your community. Do you favour or oppose to build in your community. Give reasons and examples.

Factories are one of the great sources of boosting the rustic's economy. Each and every homey establish factories in their rustic for the growth and development of their nation. If
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an
industry's owner asks me to build
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an
industry in my hometown, so
i
refers to the speaker or writer
I
will definitely let the workshop owner to to establish the cooperative. As establishing a cooperative has many advantages
such
as - by establishing factories, our bucolic's economy will get a boost and by
this
our provincial's G.D.P will slightly starts improving and the
second
profit is - New job opportunities by
this
influence people who do not have any work to do and are looking for job's will get new job opportunities and by getting appointment's civilian's will start paying taxes to the government and again by
this
bucolic's economy will get improved. The
third
improvement is - Export rate will increase and import rate will decrease. The fourth choice is that the company of the mill will help in the establishment of NGO's, school, collage in that city.
However with
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However, with
the establishment of factories the rate of air pollution, water pollution and soil pollution will
also
increase. At the conclusion of setting up of industries have more advantages as compared to the disadvantages. So for building an industry in my hometown is a great idea and it is definitely yes from me!

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