Many people choose to work or live abroad because of the higher standards of living they can find outside their home country. Do you think this brings more advantages or disadvantages to the people who follow this path?

Nowadays, a large number of

people

are abandoning their native

country

in terms of having a better quality lifestyle.

Although

, there are multiple drawbacks to

this

trend

both

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a

country

and an individual could experience,

but

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I believe it does have more

advantages

in comparison with

disadvantages

.

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essay will examine the

advantages

and

disadvantages

of residing and working in different territories. The two main

advantages

of living or working in other

countries

are a

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of higher income and

supreme

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quality of

education

.

Firstly

, many

people

switch to developed

countries

for better remuneration

policy

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. Having said that, in many

first world

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countries

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people

can earn five or six times more by working the same amount of time which might have been impossible for them if they

would

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similar hours in their home

country

. In

this

way, they are able to

fulfill

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their daily demand. Another advantage is that

,

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many

countries

offer expensive

education

free of cost for potential students by providing grants, necessary equipment and

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funds

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for carrying out research

as well as

ensuring employment as soon as right after graduation.

For example

, a survey conducted by The Daily Star a leading newspaper in Bangladesh found that, every year 80% of students who receive US government

scholarship

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do not return to Bangladesh from the USA once they complete their

education

and it

mainly

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due to

better opportunities which they may not have in their motherland.

However

,

this

trend

also

has some major

disadvantages

like homesickness and shortages of skilled workers both

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individual and

their

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home

countries

. The main disadvantage associated with staying in a foreign

country

is that

people

often feel

loneliness

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and isolated. When someone lives away from their family and

unable

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to adapt to a new environment, it drives them toward mental sickness which often causes

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poor academic performance and even committing suicide. A prime example of

this

is that every year in The United States 2% of international students commit suicide because of homesickness and academic pressure. Another drawback is that when many talented

people

leave their birthplace in order to find better opportunities, their home

country

often comes across with huge shortages of highly skilled workforce which are fundamental to development. A prime example of

this

is. In conclusion, even though there are notable drawbacks of living in another nation in terms of better

education

and high quality of living, it seems to me that the

advantages

outweigh the

disadvantages

.