Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that schools is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Undoubtedly, childre
n’s
Suggestion
the children’s
upbringing
is one of the most controversial item in every society
. It is often argued that children’s breading for being an excellent person in communi
ty, stem
from eighterSuggestion
the community
parent
s or after a negative statement used as an intensive meaning something like 'likewise' or 'also'
either
school
. In my opinion parents have a lauded role
in children’s upbringing
. In turn, this
essay will discuss the effects of parents and school
on children’s behavior.
On the one hand, manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
school
is a place to teach to younger generation how they should treat in society
. As children usually spend a third
of their time in school
, so it has a critical effects on the
ir treatment. Because teachers and classmates known as a Suggestion
effect
role
model in children’s life, therefore
passing time with variety of cul
tureSuggestion
a variety
the variety
impres
s on children’s Suggestion
cultures
upbringing
. For example
it has be
en proven by scientiAccept comma addition
example, it
st that m
ajoritSuggestion
science
scientific
y of chi
ldren who have gone to Suggestion
the majority
school
, become an efficient person in communi
ty rather
than children’s who did not go. In my view Suggestion
the community
school
is one of the most effective place teaching children how to behave in society
. To sum up, school
has a
positive effectsSuggestion
the school
on
Suggestion
effect
communi
ty.
Suggestion
the community
On the other hand
, parents play a significant role
in children’s upbringing
. Before children go to school
they spend most of their time with their family, and as children person
ality is formed by the age of 7, Suggestion
children's
therefore
parent’s treatments, relat
ionship, Suggestion
the parent’s treatments
upbringing
and many more is an imp
ortant item that effect on children’s behavioSuggestion
are
r.
manner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
For instanc
e recent resear
ches show that most children living with their parents are an excellent member of Accept comma addition
instance, recent
society
rather than children who deprive of parents. I believe that the most important factor on childr
en’s Suggestion
in
upbringing
depend on their parent’s behavior. To ta
ke every tmanner of acting or controlling yourself
behaviour
hing in con
sall things
everything
id
eration, good member of Suggestion
into
society
is the result of parent’s effort.
In conclusion, it is clear that both parents and school
have vital duty to del
iver a nice person to Suggestion
a vital duty
community
. For the reasons mentioned above parent’s role
is most important than
Suggestion
more important
school
to children’s breading. Eventually to have a better society
, children’s upbringing
must be consider as a c
ritical topic in these days.Suggestion
considered
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite