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The role of education is to prepare children for the modern world. Schools should cut arts and music out of that curriculum so that children can focus on the useful subjects such as information technology. To what extent do you agree?

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It is true that
school
Suggestion
the school
 is responsible for children accommodating with the fast paced modern life that consists of
technology
. To a certain extent I disagree with
this
 statement that the educational curriculum should cut arts and music and pay more attention to productive subjects
such
 as
technology
.
However
, in
this
 essay I will discuss why both of the courses are important for the students. Learning information
technology
 as the main course is possessing utmost importance in the modern era, as it has been significantly adopted in almost all fields of life, including schools. Survival in
this
 21st century without having knowledge about
technology
 is going to be hard. Schools and other educational institutes these days are relying more on computer-based programs while delivering lectures and conducting tests because of
this
 COVID-19 pandemic. Children who have
technological
Suggestion
technology
-based education are more likely to understand how to do the task given by the teachers and know how to use the
technology
.
Therefore
, the knowledge of technological learning at school has a critical role.
On the other hand
, the need for crafts and music courses in schools is necessary for bringing the creativity among the students. Science subjects are strictly based on scientific observations, arts like painting, DIY (do it yourself), sculpture, drawing, as well as performing
suchs
to so extreme a degree
such
searches
 as traditional dances, music performance are allowing students to think out of the box and
also
 their creativity.
Therefore
,
this
 subject is responsible for creativity and cognitive skills of the students.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • contentious
  • contemporary
  • correlation
  • foster
  • emotional intelligence
  • narrow students’ perspectives
  • critically
  • creatively
  • interdisciplinary
  • introspective
  • integration
  • debate
  • curriculum
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