School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Nowadays due
to Accept comma addition
Nowadays, due
technology
the pace of life has increased. Almost everyone has rely
on the computers specially Suggestion
relied
puplis
for their the human beings of a particular nation or community or ethnic group
peoples
pupils
purplish
studies
materials. Whilst some suggest that teachers should neglect to use the Suggestion
study
technolgy
in class and just focus on basic teaching skills. I do not agree with the statement, the practical application of science to commerce or industry
technology
technologies
i
think it refers to the speaker or writer
I
help
them to learn the things more effectively by electronics devices.
Suggestion
helps
helped
Firstly
, by using the animated videos and picturs
in computers a visual representation (of an object or scene or person or abstraction) produced on a surface
pictures
help
them to understand the questions very well and their Suggestion
helps
profiency
of learning can be improved. the quality of having great facility and competence
proficiency
For instance
, a questionnare
proved by a form containing a set of questions; submitted to people to gain statistical information
questionnaire
cambridge
university showed that children learn a university in England
Cambridge
fast
by visualizing the things. Suggestion
faster
Furthermore
,
sometime teachers Accept space
,
donot
know about the particular Suggestion
do not
topic
Accept comma addition
topic, then
then
they can easily grasp the knowledge with the help of computers. Therefore
, it is easier for tutors to explain
them.
Suggestion
explain
In addition
, in current time everything is based on latest technology
such
as jobs, order essential products online and so forth.
To illustrate 85
% job is done by the computers. Accept comma addition
illustrate, 85
Thus
future generation should know the use of electronics. Apart from that Suggestion
This
technology
allows childern
to become content a young person of either sex
children
creaters
a person who grows or makes or invents things
creators
creatures
beacuse
they can create wiki page, write for the reason that; on account of
because
blog
and other content. Suggestion
blogs
Hence
, it will worthful
for their carrier engaged in or accustomed to close observation
watchful
hurtful
youthful
also
To sum up,
computers Accept space
,
has become
part and parcel Suggestion
have become
in
our life and it will more impact the upcoming years Suggestion
of
beacuse
online classes will be renownedfor the reason that; on account of
because
.
So teachers should encourage them to learn the skills by advanced Accept space
.
technology
Submitted by lohankajal2002 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Fully explain your ideas
To get an excellent score in the IELTS Task 2 writing section, one of the easiest and most effective tips is structuring your writing in the most solid format. A great argument essay structure may be divided to four paragraphs, in which comprises of four sentences (excluding the conclusion paragraph, which comprises of three sentences).
For we to consider an essay structure a great one, it should be looking like this:
- Paragraph 1 - Introduction
- Sentence 1 - Background statement
- Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
- Sentence 3 - Thesis
- Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
- Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
- Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
- Sentence 2 - Example
- Sentence 3 - Discussion
- Sentence 4 - Conclusion
- Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
- Sentence 1 - Summary
- Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
- Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation
Our recommended essay structure above comprises of fifteen (15) sentences, which will make your essay approximately 250 to 275 words.
