School children are becoming far too dependent on computers. This is having an alarming effect on reading and writing skills. Teachers need to avoid using computers in the classroom at all costs and go back to teaching basic study skills. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Nowadays due

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Nowadays, due

technology

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the pace of life has increased. Almost everyone has

rely

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relied

on the computers specially

puplis

the human beings of a particular nation or community or ethnic group

peoples

pupils

purplish

for their

studies

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study

materials. Whilst some suggest that teachers should neglect to use the

technolgy

the practical application of science to commerce or industry

technology

technologies

in class and just focus on basic teaching skills. I do not agree with the statement,

refers to the speaker or writer

think it

help

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helps

helped

them to learn the things more effectively by electronics devices.

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, by using the animated videos and

picturs

a visual representation (of an object or scene or person or abstraction) produced on a surface

pictures

in computers

help

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helps

them to understand the questions very well and their

profiency

the quality of having great facility and competence

proficiency

of learning can be improved.

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, a

questionnare

a form containing a set of questions; submitted to people to gain statistical information

questionnaire

proved by

cambridge

a university in England

Cambridge

university showed that children learn

fast

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faster

by visualizing the things.

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sometime teachers

donot

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do not

know about the particular

topic

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topic, then

then

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they can easily grasp the knowledge with the help of computers.

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, it is easier for tutors

to explain

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explain

them.

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, in current time everything is based on latest

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such

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as jobs, order essential products online and so forth. To

illustrate 85

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illustrate, 85

% job is done by the computers.

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Thus

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This

future generation should know the use of electronics. Apart from that

technology

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allows

childern

a young person of either sex

children

to become content

creaters

a person who grows or makes or invents things

creators

creatures

beacuse

for the reason that; on account of

because

they can create wiki page, write

blog

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blogs

and other content.

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, it will

worthful

engaged in or accustomed to close observation

watchful

hurtful

youthful

for their carrier

also

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To sum up

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computers

has become

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have become

part and parcel

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our life and it will more impact the upcoming years

beacuse

for the reason that; on account of

because

online classes will be renowned

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So teachers should encourage them to learn the skills by advanced

technology

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.5

Complete response

6.5

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

5 paragraphs

244 words

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