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People are becoming dependent on the Internet and phone. Do the benefits of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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Nowadays automation is playing a key role in every individual’s life. They are tending to depend on
Internet
Suggestion
the internet
the Internet
 and phone for everything. In
this
 essay, I will discuss how the advantages outweigh the disadvantages. Mobile phone and the internet
is very often used
Suggestion
are very often used
 by anyone and anywhere in
this
 century.
That is
, people are using
technology
 in every walk of life
such
 as paying utility bills, entertainment, travel and for listening news.
For instance
, to watch a latest movie you can view it online through various applications either while commuting or even by sitting at home.
In addition
,
inorder
Suggestion
in order
 to pay the mobile bill you can do it by using your phone and avoid long queues to do so. By all means,
technology
 is playing a prominent role in helping people by making their life easy. Despite, having lot of benefits, there are various drawbacks to it. People cannot completely rely on
technology
 as it is fully not secured due to hackers. One of them is, facing
technical error
Suggestion
a technical error
 while doing some important transaction as there might be an internet breakdown or connectivity issue which may cancel the transaction.
Furthermore
, uploading or sharing of the confidential information is not validated as
this
 may lead to breach of confidentiality raising legal issues.
Therefore
, people cannot depend on
technology
 completely. In Conclusion, though the
technology
 has its own challenges. In my view, it is benefiting the economy globally. It has made means of communication and sharing of the views very accessible and approachable.
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