car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past 30 years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. how to do you think this statement is? what measures can government take to discourage people from using their cars.

No
doubtly
to double the degree
doubly
, most of cities are suffering from transportation issues due to numbers of wagon are increasing every day.
in
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In
addition, some cities like Bombay have long traffic jam for many hours.
authority
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Authority
can try to control with various
ways but
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ways, but
without citizens help and awareness, it is handicapped I will explain it in
further
paragraph. Before three decades, machine owners were considered as a royal family member and it was too much costly. People were satisfied with their lifestyle even wealthier family
also
tried to skip
purchase
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the purchase
of
wagon
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the wagon
a wagon
. There had less advanced automobile on the road so people were less suffered from
influx
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an influx
the influx
for pollution problems. Today, every family will adjust van requirement in their basic needs,
further more
in addition
furthermore
, in the race of showing standard they buy more costly and spare
car
for
family
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the family
. No-one ready to compromise with comfort zone so they use own
car
to travel and avoid sharing with other. As sometime public transport is not only
crowded but
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crowded, but
also
less frequent, commuter
choose
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chooses
to use person vehicle.
traffic
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Traffic
issue is spread
worldwide so
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worldwide, so
every government
try
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tries
different ways to solve problem like increase tax, permit drive
car
odd even
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odd, even
wise, charge
higher panelty
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higher penalties
higher penalty
a higher penalty
whenever any rule break and many more.
For example
, government of Delhi
arrange
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arranges
days as per
car
's number odd or even with the help of these people need to use public transport or sharing
vehicle
Suggestion
a vehicle
the vehicle
with friends. Old construction does not have enough parking space and recklessness parking is always
also
a big reason of traffic. I conclude that, ministry can take strict action to solve the issue, but without public support and awareness, we cannot get acquired result public should try to avoid unnecessary practice of boat.
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