You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to shop manager. In your letter: - Describe the problem with the equipment - explain what happened when Phoned the shop - say what would you like the manager to do

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

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letter to draw your attention

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Microwave

oven that was delivered

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my doorstep. On Monday 04-May-2020, I visited your store located in Sambaji Chowk, Ulhasnagar – 421004. I was pleased with the brands of

Microwave

ovens at your place. Apparently, I booked Samsung 2 litre

Microwave

oven model number 32145.

However

, after delivery when tried to operate with constant temperature while preparation of cookies, our kitchen faced a short circuit. Later, another recipe was tried, which

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and even worse affecting

mass

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short circuit of

apartment

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. As soon as I noticed some technical issues with the equipment, I called up at your store. Despite being my phone was put on hold, it was disconnected after 15 minutes.

Furthermore

, customer service agent picked up after 4 calls, and

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strongly against replacement of

valuable

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item. I would request you to look into

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matter.

Although

a replacement of

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oven will be appreciated, which is need of the day. Adding to it, as said Customer is king, please respect their calls and value them. Yours faithfully, Rashmi Malviya