Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Will this do good or harm to children?

Never before in the history has the problem of education been

such

salient than today. Since people treat education much more important, parents are likely to create some new methods to encourage their children to become more passionate about

study

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the study

. Recently, the phenomenon that parents give their children

money

as a

reward

for getting

high

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high marks

a high mark

mark

in school has caused wide public concern. Some people indicate that it will change children’s opinion on

study

, making them believe only

money

is the purpose of

study

.

However

, I contend that giving some

money

to children as a

reward

is a good choice, a choice that its merits weigh out its drawbacks. 　　To start with, giving

money

to the children as a

reward

can stimulate children to

study

harder. When children get feedback

of

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on

about

for

their hard work, the

study

will become a happy job

instead

of just a boring duty. We cannot refute that sometimes

study

could be really boring, doing a lot of exercises, reading passages, working out math problems. So setting a goal for children is necessary for the children to keep their

interests

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interest

. If they could use the

money

to buy what they want as a gift, children will pursue the good

mark

harder. Another reason drives me to indicate is that, financial thinking as an important ability which is useful to the modern people, meaning that we need to teach our children how to manage their own

money

. During the method that giving

money

as a

reward

, children will have a chance to manage their own

money

. Parents will benefit children not only to their current

life but

Accept comma addition

life, but

also

to their future.

For instance

, my mother used to give me some

money

as a

reward

when I was young. And I used that

money

to start my own account in the bank. After that, I would periodically save some

money

, which has already become a large amount of

money

nowadays. Admittedly, it is unwise to give much

money

once a time when children get a good

mark

, since that the children will seek only for

money

during their

study

. The goal we expect is to encourage our children and tell them to pursue more success.

However

, if we make sure that children will not misunderstand the meaning of the

reward

and keep a

health

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healthy

attitude

to

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for

the

money

. It will be fine to do so. Judging from what I’ve mentioned above, I should reinforce my perspective that it is good for parents to give their children

money

as a

reward

for getting

high

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high marks

a high mark

mark

in school.