Some parents offer their school-age children money for each high grade (mark) they get in school. Will this do good or harm to children?

Never before in the history has the problem of education been

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salient than today. Since people treat education much more important, parents are likely to create some new methods to encourage their children to become more passionate about

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study

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the study

. Recently, the phenomenon that parents give their children

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as a

reward

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for getting

high

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high marks

a high mark

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in school has caused wide public concern. Some people indicate that it will change children’s opinion on

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, making them believe only

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is the purpose of

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.

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, I contend that giving some

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to children as a

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is a good choice, a choice that its merits weigh out its drawbacks. 　　To start with, giving

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to the children as a

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can stimulate children to

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harder. When children get feedback

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their hard work, the

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will become a happy job

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of just a boring duty. We cannot refute that sometimes

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could be really boring, doing a lot of exercises, reading passages, working out math problems. So setting a goal for children is necessary for the children to keep their

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interest

. If they could use the

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to buy what they want as a gift, children will pursue the good

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harder. Another reason drives me to indicate is that, financial thinking as an important ability which is useful to the modern people, meaning that we need to teach our children how to manage their own

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. During the method that giving

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as a

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, children will have a chance to manage their own

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. Parents will benefit children not only to their current

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life, but

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to their future.

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, my mother used to give me some

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as a

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when I was young. And I used that

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to start my own account in the bank. After that, I would periodically save some

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, which has already become a large amount of

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nowadays. Admittedly, it is unwise to give much

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once a time when children get a good

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, since that the children will seek only for

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during their

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. The goal we expect is to encourage our children and tell them to pursue more success.

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, if we make sure that children will not misunderstand the meaning of the

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and keep a

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the

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. It will be fine to do so. Judging from what I’ve mentioned above, I should reinforce my perspective that it is good for parents to give their children

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as a

reward

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for getting

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high marks

a high mark

mark

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in school.