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As computers translate quickly and accurately, is learning foreign languages a waste of time? To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#computers #languages #waste #time
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Nowadays, with the development of computer science, computers can translate to and from all foreign languages.
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people believe that studying different languages is a waste of time.
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, machines cannot convey the manner of speakers.
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, if the speaker says the word in different tones so the computer will not be able to express the emotions of people or when there is face-to-face conversations, we can understand people from their expressions even if we don't use many words. But machines cannot do
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, when you are learning a foreign
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 you learn the culture of the country, customs and traditions, literature and poetry. One example of
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 when I began to learn Russian
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 I learnt about the culture of the Russian people and read a lot of Russian classic books. I am happy that I can speak four languages because there is a Turkmen proverb "One
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, one person: two
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, two persons". It is a great feeling when you are in another country speaking their
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 of walking around translating every sentence.
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, computers can be used to translate something when you are learning the
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However, many
people use it to translate the product labels which were bought from another country. In conclusion, I disagree with that argument because of a translation machine help us in some way it doesn't mean that we can quit studying
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 because learning
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Computers are proficient in certain domains but struggle with complex language nuances
  • Machine translation lacks human touch and may not capture context accurately
  • Learning a foreign language is a valuable investment in personal development
  • Language learning fosters empathy and appreciation for different cultures
  • Multilingual individuals are in high demand in the job market
  • Acquiring new languages expands one's horizons and opens doors to new opportunities
  • Bilingualism enhances cognitive flexibility and problem-solving abilities
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