Recently, many people know a few of their neighbors. What is the cause of this problem? What can be done to solve this problem? Give reasons for your answer and any example from your own experience.

In the current era of modernisation, people are losing interest in knowing the
next
-door neighbour.
This
is a growing problem in urban and rural areas alike.
This
paragraph will deal with the possible reasons and solutions to
this
situation. It is quite evident that in the past few decades, people
do not have
Suggestion
did not have
close relationships with their fellow neighbours and prefer to spend time indoors. The primary reason of
this
phenomenon is the introduction of digital media in the 21st century that has increased screen times and reduced face to face conversations. In the past times, people used to share their family matters and worries with the people living nearby and everybody knew everybody.
However
, with technological advancements people bury themselves in online social interactions as people work at different times are busy to have leisure
chitchat
Suggestion
chit chat
.
pro
Suggestion
Pro
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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