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Some kids become famous at a very younge age. Do you think it has more advantages or disadvantages?

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Now a
days
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day
, becoming famous by having certain excellent skills for juveniles is becoming an usual thing. But " every coin has two sides". So,
this
 particular topic
also
 has some advantages and drawbacks. I would
discuu
to consider or examine in speech or writing
discuss
 both benefits and disadvantages and present with my own opinion. On the brighter side, if a child is famous and gaining
attention
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the attention
 of thousands,
then
 he can earn money which makes them
to feel
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feel
 independent at
early age
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an early age
. Celebrity youngsters
also earns
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also earn
have also earned
 lots of love
amd
in order to; used instead of "to", especially after try, come, go
and
 respect from
teir
of them or themselves
their
 fans which helps them to be confident in their respectful life.
Hence
, being a celebrity has various personal as well as social benefits for
yougsters
a young person of either sex
youngsters
. On the other side, sometimes it can difficult to handle fame at
early age
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an early age
early ages
 because of their
independency
freedom from control or influence of another or others
independence
.
they
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They
 are earning by themselves so they do not need their
parents's
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parents'
 help and cross their
bounderies
the line or plane indicating the limit or extent of something
boundaries
.
Moreover
, it
also agfect
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also affects
also affect
 their studies.
Continuasly
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Continuously
Continually
 involving to sharpen their talents
can leads
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can lead
 to less time for children.
For example
, if a child is cricketer or a dancer, he or she needs to practice constantly to improve his or her skill.
Therefore
, their academics will be surely affected by
this
. Celebrity youngsters used to be always busy to deal with
their fame and to
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their fame and
 increase their popularity.
Hence
, they will spend less time to socialize and play. To conclude, drawbacks are outweigh the advantages of being popular at
early age
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an early age
. I
beleive
accept as true; take to be true
believe
, it affects on child psychologically as well as socially. Good balance and guidance is required for them to be on track to
experiance
the accumulation of knowledge or skill that results from direct participation in events or activities
experience
 livelihood.

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