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Some people prefer activities and lifestyle in hot climate while others prefer activities and lifestyle in cold climate. Discuss both views and give your opinion

#people #activities #lifestyle #climate
Weather conditions are a common concern in our daily lives since they often change our routines, moods and ways to face life
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However
, there are some people who embrace hot seasons and others who tend to enjoy cold days. I would say that at a low temperature it seems that it would be a matter of adaptation and mindset. There are several benefits
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of
 living in a country with hot temperatures
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People can get vitamin D from the sun when doing different activities outdoors
such
 us going on a picnic, having a sunbath, doing beach sports, swimming in the beach among others Another benefit is to have the chance to wear brighter
colors
a flag that shows its nationality
colours
 and lighter clothe which may help to be on a good mood
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In contrast
, cold weather can be rough since it takes us at home for a long time with a
cozy
enjoying or affording comforting warmth and shelter especially in a small space
cosy
crazy
 blanket and hot chocolate
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However
, it is well
know
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known
 that the happiest countries in the world are the coldest
such
 as Norway and Finland
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 According to them, skiing
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 ice fishing
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ice skating.
snowman
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Snowman
 building or stroll outside to fill your lungs with fresh air would be the perfect activities to embrace during
this
 time. To sum up
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 I would say that flexibility and adaptability play an important role in
this
 scenario
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