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Some organisations believe that their employees should dress smartly. Others value quality of work above appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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Many companies think their colleagues and workers should have good
appearance
. While some gives more importance to the
quality
 and dedication towards
work
 rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 clothes.
This
 essay will discuss both arguments and will provide evidence that why
quality
 matters as compared to dressing smartly. In some
organization it
Accept comma addition
organization, it
 is necessary to dress up in
good manner
Suggestion
a good manner
. As they consider a person's
appearance
 more
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
 having other
quality
.
Still in
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Still, in
 many industries much importance is given to the person's
appearance
 rather
then
conjunction used in comparatives
than
it's
of a thing, of it; possessive form of "it"
its
 ability and knowledge of
work
. In many
proffession
the body of people in a learned occupation
professions
professional
professionals
 to dress smartly becomes essential.
For instance
 selling and marketing companies
gives
Suggestion
give
 more consideration to the looks. As the salesman should look smart and should have
good personality
Suggestion
a good personality
 and speech to convince the buyers or customers. While in some occupation dressing style do not matter as more attention is given to
quality
Suggestion
the quality
 of
work
.
For example
 Doctors, farmers
etc
 are few professions where your ability and dedication towards
work
 is preferred. As for Doctors it is not necessary to wear white coats. The only thing is required in that occupation is how you treat a patient. Another good example is farmers where no formal clothes and shoes are essential. But the knowledge of agriculture and soil should be
their
in or at that place
there
. So
that
Suggestion
that's
 good
quality
 of food, vegetables and crops are grown.
Thus in
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Thus, in
this
 kind of jobs there
is
Suggestion
are
 no requirements of good
appearance
. To conclude, In my point of view at the end its
quality
 of
work
 which is much important
then
 wearing branded suits. And 'one should never judge a book by its cover'.
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
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