Write a paragraph about a store/business that you love to shop. Online text

Everyone of us loves to shop, right? And everyone has a store that they love and often buy there. And me too, I often buy cosmetics at the Na
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osmetics. Its address is in Danang city. Many types of cosmetics are sold here and they are imported from many different countries
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as France, Korea, Japan .
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ut mainly the store specializes in selling genuine Korean cosmetics. Na
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osmetics is located right on the main road so it's easy to find. Briefly speaking about the appearance, the space in the store is very spacious and airy, the layout is very eye-catching. At
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point, you will be consulted carefully by professional staff to choose the right product for your skin. Na
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lways has samples so we can check
first
and decide whether to buy or not.
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The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

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To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

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