Some people think movies should only be for entertainment. Others think that they should also have educational values.Discuss both view and give your opinion.

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People have different

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views

about the role and the function of movies.Some people believe that watching

film

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is the best

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to reduce stress or relax

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while others think that movies

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have educational values.

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people tend to watch blockbuster movies to reduce stress or relax after a long day at school or work.In

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they can

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have

a better work-life to balance modern society.

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more and more

film

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maker

provide

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provides

a variety of

film

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products

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as comedy

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documentary

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action

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comedy genes

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are

one of the best choice for many people.

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going to the cinema

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they just sit in front of

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a laptop

the laptop

or television to watch movies.

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movies

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the effective

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to help people have great moments with

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friends

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others think that

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also has

educational values.

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language.In fact

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you can watch movies of native actor or actress to improve about pronunciation as well as vocabulary.

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watching movies not only help people study a new language

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but it

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allows them broaden knowledge

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culture to

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the traditions

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countries

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they will have a chance to know about local food

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holiday destination

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celebrate and so on.In

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they will not fell shock culture

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when they travel. For the reasons mentioned above

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that movies can truth to entertain because

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it is

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a great source to study

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as learn language or culture.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

Summary
Restatement of thesis
Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

In conclusion
To conclude
To summarize
Finally
In a nutshell
In general

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

257 words

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