One problem faced by almost every large city is traffic congestion. What do you think the causes are? What solutions can you suggest?

Traffic congestion has been one of the biggest
challenge
Suggestion
challenges
which a large number of cities are facing nowadays.
This
essay with examine the main causes of traffic congestion and some possible solutions to
this
problem
.
Firstly
, the major cause of
this
problem
is limited and inconvenient public transports.
In other words
, travelling by a
car
is more flexible and convenient to people’s
life style
a manner of living that reflects the person's values and attitudes
lifestyle
, weekly household shopping,
for instance
. It would be easier for people to catty things to their living place by a
car
instead
of a public transport
such
as a bus which might currently contain a lot of people. Because of
this
, it leads people to become a
car
owner. The additional cause of
this
trouble is
also
about there is no control in
car
commission. Everyone can purchase a
car
as long as he has enough revenue for it. If a major city has approximately a million people, each owns a
car
, there would be a million cars in that city.
This
becomes traffic jam. Some possible solutions to
this
problem
are encouraging people to use more public transports along with improving them, and increasing all types of
car
expenditures. By encouraging people to aware of the effects that would occur after too much
car
using,
such
as PM2.5, together with improving public transports to be more convenient and modern, more and more people would turn attention to travel by public transports.
Moreover
, increasing all types of
car
expenditures,
for
example annual
Accept comma addition
example, annual
car
tax, would lead more people to consider if they literally need a
car
.
Finally
, people will use public transports unquestioningly. In conclusion, limited and inconvenient public transports and no control in
car
commission lead many large cities to
traffic
Suggestion
the traffic problem
traffic problems
problem
.
However
,
this
problem
can be tackled by encouraging people to use public transports and improving them as well as increasing all types of
car
expenditures.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traffic congestion
  • urban population
  • public transportation
  • urban planning
  • infrastructure
  • economic strength
  • consumerism
  • car ownership
  • commuting
  • peak hours
  • public transit
  • carpooling
  • ride-sharing
  • remote work
  • flexible working hours
  • cycling infrastructure
  • congestion charges
  • traffic management systems
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