Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

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Due to technological advancement, it has helped to make the travelling and to socially connected with people easier. I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages in my essay

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In todays

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an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)

scenario

, people can commute from one city to another with the help of private and public vehicles availability. Earlier, to commute from one place to another was a tedious or impossible task. With the modernization of private vehicles and public commutation facilities

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it is quick and fast to travel

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hometown

is in Bharuch,

however my

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however, my

working place is 70 Kms away from my

hometown

. With the help of private vehicle

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refers to the speaker or writer

can reach

form

a giver or sender

from

hometown

to my office in an hour. Nowadays, several

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publicly

opting for a job away from the countryside

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the reasons are due to good salary pay, for better growth as well as for the fruitful future of their loved ones.

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with the betterment of technology

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children fled away from their parents

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due to which the rate of loneliness and depression increased among senior citizen. In one of the article from US University researched that

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75% of the children are staying away from

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of them or themselves

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hometown

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home town

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use

of social media

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a formally arranged gathering

meeting

meetings

in person among people have reduced. To summarize,

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down saying

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down, saying

that working and living in any corner of the world is possible due to increase in the number of private vehicles as well as

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of staying away from the family they can be in touch with each other with the help of innovation of technology called mobile, telephone

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Thus

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the advantages

outweigh the disadvantages.

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1Word repetition
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278 words

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Topic Vocabulary:

Communication technology
Remote working
Economic growth
Cultural exchange
Urban congestion
Social inequalities
Transient populations
Globally homogeneous
Work-life separation
Connectivity
Erosion of local cultures

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