Today, people can work and live in anywhere they want, because of the improvement of communication technology and transport. Do advantages of this development outweigh the disadvantages?

Due to technological advancement, it has helped to make the travelling and to socially connected with people easier. I will discuss both advantages and disadvantages in my essay
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In todays
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an outline or synopsis of a play (or, by extension, of a literary work)
scenario
, people can commute from one city to another with the help of private and public vehicles availability. Earlier, to commute from one place to another was a tedious or impossible task. With the modernization of private vehicles and public commutation facilities
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it is quick and fast to travel
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My
hometown
is in Bharuch,
however my
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however, my
working place is 70 Kms away from my
hometown
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i
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I
can reach
form
a giver or sender
from
my
hometown
to my office in an hour. Nowadays, several
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publicly
opting for a job away from the countryside
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the reasons are due to good salary pay, for better growth as well as for the fruitful future of their loved ones.
However
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with the betterment of technology
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children fled away from their parents
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due to which the rate of loneliness and depression increased among senior citizen. In one of the article from US University researched that
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75% of the children are staying away from
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home town
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Also
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use
of social media
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in person among people have reduced. To summarize,
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down, saying
that working and living in any corner of the world is possible due to increase in the number of private vehicles as well as
instead
of staying away from the family they can be in touch with each other with the help of innovation of technology called mobile, telephone
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Thus
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the advantages
outweigh the disadvantages.
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