Some people believe that technology has made man more social. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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Technology

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is becoming part of our day to day

life

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. It carries huge impact on our daily routines in work as well as personal

life

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. The amount of hours that we spend hand in hand with

technology

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is staggering. And out of that,

large percentage

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a large percentage

of time is consumed by social media platforms. Social

aggeragators

a person who collects things

aggregators

like Facebook, twitter, Instagram, Whatsapp,

etc

studies intended to provide general knowledge and intellectual skills (rather than occupational or professional skills)

arts

keep us in constant connection of our friends and families.

This

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have

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has

a dual impact on our

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life both

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life, both

positive and negative socially. As humanity

itself we

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itself, we

have become more social. The appreciation of our achievements is

fullfilling

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fulfilled

fulfilling

, even though virtually conveyed. Sharing our joys and sorrows is what makes us

social

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socially

, and

technology

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had enabled us to do so with

somone

a human being

someone

even hundreds of miles away. We are able to organize social events, political gatherings, community meetings in a more structured and easy manner. It has

inturn

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in turn

increased the amount of occasions when one can meet others.

Techonological

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Technological

mediums

such

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as chats, photos and videos have made the sharing experience more vivid. Opening doors to our private lives have made us more socially accountable as well.

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However we

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However, we

cannot ignore the downfalls of

technology

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on society. Our human psychological nature is badly affected. Teenagers are more socially isolated. Staying in-homes more often than meeting with people and involve in sports activities. Avoiding community connections involving direct interface with people.

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Finally I

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Finally, I

would say,

technology

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still have more good than bad to offer. And it is up to

us how shall

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us, how shall

we receive the gifts of

technology

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. The ever

evolving innovative

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evolving, innovative

ways of

technology

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to connect us is

profoundly going to

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going to profoundly

improve our social

life

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

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276 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

social interaction
connect
communicate
video conferencing
stay in touch
online communities
forums
like-minded individuals
global communication
collaboration
access to information
knowledge
bridge the gap
social isolation
detachment
face-to-face communication
genuine human connection
maintain
real-life interactions
balance

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