many people believe that every individual is responsible for his /her own healthy lifestyle. others believe that governments should take care of it. discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The diagrams illustrate some changes to a small
island
which has been developed for tourism. It is clear that the
island
has changed considerably with the introduction of tourism. The main developments are that the
island
is accessible and visitors have somewhere to stay. Looking at the maps, we can see that the accommodation was built to cater to
other
any of various alternatives; some other
another
visit come to the
island
. There is a reception building built in the middle and a restaurant
to
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in
the north of the reception. Before these developments, the
island
was completely bare apart from a few trees. There are
also
other facilities built
up on
in contact with, on top of
upon
the
island
include a pier, where boat can dock. There is
also
a short road linking the pier with the reception and restaurant, and footpaths connect the hut.
Finally
, there is a design swimming area for tourists off a beach on the
western
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west
of the
island
.
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