history tells that people have often thought about creating an ideal society , but most of the times fail in making this happen.what is your opinion about an ideal society? Can we creat an ideal society?

If we look at history, it is clear that since time immemorial, people have always wanted to create an ideal

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but have been unsuccessful. In the following essay, I intend to discuss what makes an ideal

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and how we can create one. An ideal

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is a

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where the needs of the people regardless of their race, religion or wealth would be met. Many great thinkers,

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as Plato, Thomas More and Dr Martin Luther King Jr.

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to the public over the years.

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, these dreams failed because different people have different ideas about a perfect

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. To make it happen, either the ideals of all the people have to be fulfilled, or all the people would have to have the same ones. Imagine a

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with no crime, no terrorism, no warfare, no conflicts of cultures, no racism, no gender discrimination, no poisoned tongues, no killing, no lying, no stealing, no adultery and no excuses.

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can never exist. It would be wrong even to think of one. A perfect

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needs some kind of social inequality, or as I call it, a distinction inability. Those in the higher strata of

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would be there because of their superior abilities and have greater responsibilities and,

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, a higher social standing. An ideal

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should have some struggle. If you had no struggle in life would you be happy? No, because that takes all the fun and enjoyment out of the difficulty, the losing, the failures, and the overcoming, the victory, the success. There are many ways in which we can make an ideal

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of all, there must be a democracy and a strong

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the ability to rule over the country. It should try to make the citizens' lives better by making better social and financial conditions to live. There should be no corruption in the government.

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, I believe, one of the most necessary things in the ideal

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freedom

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. No people and no

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are happy and ideal when they are not free.

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, we must remember that – ‘One’s

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ends there where other’s starts’. If we will feel free and do not disturb others

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we will have an ideal

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. An ideal

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would allow complete

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to everybody and complete

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individually

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down, saying

that, a perfect

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is difficult to attain as everyone has different concepts of an ideal

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, if we all respect our

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and in doing so know our limitations so that others can enjoy their

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then

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it can be called an ideal

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