history tells that people have often thought about creating an ideal society , but most of the times fail in making this happen.what is your opinion about an ideal society? Can we creat an ideal society?

If we look at history, it is clear that since time immemorial, people have always wanted to create an ideal
society
but have been unsuccessful. In the following essay, I intend to discuss what makes an ideal
society
and how we can create one. An ideal
society
is a
society
where the needs of the people regardless of their race, religion or wealth would be met. Many great thinkers,
such
as Plato, Thomas More and Dr Martin Luther King Jr.
have
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Have
offered their opinions on
this
to the public over the years.
However
, these dreams failed because different people have different ideas about a perfect
society
. To make it happen, either the ideals of all the people have to be fulfilled, or all the people would have to have the same ones. Imagine a
society
with no crime, no terrorism, no warfare, no conflicts of cultures, no racism, no gender discrimination, no poisoned tongues, no killing, no lying, no stealing, no adultery and no excuses.
Such
a
society
can never exist. It would be wrong even to think of one. A perfect
society
needs some kind of social inequality, or as I call it, a distinction inability. Those in the higher strata of
society
would be there because of their superior abilities and have greater responsibilities and,
therefore
, a higher social standing. An ideal
society
should have some struggle. If you had no struggle in life would you be happy? No, because that takes all the fun and enjoyment out of the difficulty, the losing, the failures, and the overcoming, the victory, the success. There are many ways in which we can make an ideal
society
.
First
of all, there must be a democracy and a strong
government which
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government, which
has
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have
the ability to rule over the country. It should try to make the citizens' lives better by making better social and financial conditions to live. There should be no corruption in the government.
Finally
, I believe, one of the most necessary things in the ideal
society
is
freedom
. No people and no
society
are happy and ideal when they are not free.
However
, we must remember that – ‘One’s
freedom
ends there where other’s starts’. If we will feel free and do not disturb others
freedom
we will have an ideal
society
. An ideal
society
would allow complete
freedom
to everybody and complete
individuality
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individually
. To sum up, I pen
down saying
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down, saying
that, a perfect
society
is difficult to attain as everyone has different concepts of an ideal
society
.
However
, if we all respect our
freedom
and in doing so know our limitations so that others can enjoy their
freedom
then
it can be called an ideal
society
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