IELTS 8 - Exam 1 - Writing Task 2 Some people think that parents should teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that schools is the place to learn this. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There always have been a great debate about who should be the

responsable

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responsibility

responsible

of

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for

teaching children how to be good citizens. Some people argue that family should have the main role in our boys and girls education; but others believe that

this

is schools main reason of

existance

the state or fact of existing

existence

. In my

opinion both

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opinion, both

are very important and there should be a balance between the classroom and the house. The family is the

first

place where children start to learn from life. Without

question our

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question, our

parents are our

first

teachers. Correct manners, principle

are learned

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is learnt

is learned

has learned

in

earlies

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the early

earliest

the earlier

the earliest

years of our

existance

the state or fact of existing

existence

, and the only persons who can teach us these

crutial

qualities are our mothers and fathers. Even when the child gets older, he or she is still learning, and the family must always be there to guide and

advice

give advice to

advise

.

Likewise

, schools is very important for our

develop

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development

as individuals. Teachers provide students with knowledge, not only for maths of sciences, but

also

with good examples of how can they become future good members of society. Sometimes the relationship between a teacher and his (or her) students

trascend

be greater in scope or size than some standard

transcend

the classroom and they are respected and loved like good friends or a family member. They are our non-family

first

role models, so

its

it is

it's

very important that their actions impact in students hearts and minds. A

well

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good

balance between school and family is needed. Even with the best teachers of the world, if the family is

disfunctional

impaired in function; especially of a bodily system or organ

dysfunctional

then

it is very

probably

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probable

that the child ends like a very violent person.

Likewise

, a well structured family without the correct education for their children may be

rising

increasing in quantity or value

raising

a very noble human being, but not a well prepared member of society. In conclusion, I believe that parents and school have the same share of

responsability

the social force that binds you to the courses of action demanded by that force

responsibility

in our

children

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children's

child's

education. With good communication and

cohetion

the state of cohering or sticking together

cohesion

from

them we

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them, we

can ensure our children’s future.