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You saw an advert for the post of finance manager at the vacancy board. You want to apply for the same job. But, you have been late for applying for the same. Write a letter along with your resume to your prospective employer. In your letter • introduce yourself • talk about your skills • reasons for your delay

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Dear Ms Hugo', I am writing to express my interest in the Finance Manager position at Legacy Capital that I found on Indeed com
This
 position interests me it combines my financial because expertise and my passion for communication with local communities My experience in Foreign languages and Translation (English, French) makes me for
this
 role a strong candidate with more than 4 years of experience in the field of Customer Support Specialist in the fintech project strong I have developed customer service and communication skills. I am able to provide excellent customer service by responding to inquiries in a timely, accurate manner.
Moreover
, my problem-solving skills are excellent. I stay calm and professional
while
 dealing with difficult clients I consider myself as knowledgeable about the products and services of your company. offered by My experience taught me the Importance of detailed record-keeping and organization,
along with
 best practices for managing matters. the financial
In addition
 to my financial knowledge, I possess technical and analytical skills that me excel in my role. I am good at Zendesk, Yira, Atlassian, Kanban, CRM systems, SAP
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, Excel, Power BI, and Canva As a lifelong learner, I adapt quickly to new software platforms.
Also
, I am a supportive person. I have developed, improved and optimized procedures, trained new employees and developed and led effective teams
Furthermore
, I am that I can contribute to making confidence a positive your company and I look
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 to the opportunity to discuss it. I have attached to
this
 email my resume and I am happy to provide you with contact details for my professional reference if you desire I am 30574 available by phone at +3809592 or by email at lykua ukr.net during regular business hours, So please contact me I was not able to submit my CV on 15 October because I had an emergency at home Thank you for your time and consideration Sincerely, Liudmyla Berezhynsks
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coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas into clear paragraphs, with each paragraph focusing on a single idea.
task achievement
Ensure your letter contains a consistent tone that is formal and professional, suitable for a job application.
task achievement
You effectively express your interest in the job and provide a relevant background.
coherence cohesion
The letter has a respectful greeting and closing, aligning well with formal letter conventions.

Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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