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What are advantages and disadvantages of leaving your country to live or study abroad?

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When we are talking about
advantages
Suggestion
the advantages
 and disadvantages of leaving our
country
 to live or study abroad, we might hold up as a model many cases and aspects of our life. At the
first
, we will discuss about some advantages as we will get more new knowledge, skills and possibility to develop our world outlook. Learning the language and traditions of another
country it
Accept comma addition
country, it
 is
useful and incredible process
Suggestion
a useful and incredible process
,
also
 helps to us understand other people. During the studying and living there are appear the chance to degust different traditional foods of other
country
. Studying abroad will open new doors in our future. It is
also
 useful meet new friends and increase of their range,
this
 is
most amazing process
Suggestion
the most amazing process
. On the other side, we are going to talk about
disadvantages
Suggestion
the disadvantages
.
For instance
, it may be difficult communication and insight out another language, when we do not know it well enough. Earning the money and finding the work
this
 is the most necessary to cover our daily consumptions. One the most important thing it is the boredom about our family and motherland in that there are we grew up and spent our childhood. In the conclusion, I may say that
advantages
Suggestion
the advantages
 and disadvantages of leaving our
country
 to live or study abroad has equal causes and depend on the person. But we always try to achieve our dreams and targets, overcome all the issues in
this
 way.
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