These days, fooddays, food travels long distances before reaching consumers, and it is therefore believed that consuming locally grown food would bring about a number of economic and environmental benefits. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages ?

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Now a days
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Nowadays
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due to globalization
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food
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travels thousands of miles in order to reach to its consumer.A number of
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community, believe
communities believe
communities communities believe
that utilizing locally grown
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would be beneficial in terms of its environmental and economical factor.
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essay will discuss the positive and negative aspects of both points of view. As regards the pros
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when
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is transported from one place to different regions of the world
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it is exposed to many environmental factors which can mitigate an adverse impact on our environment.
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is because, various forms of transportation
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as, trains and trucks can consume a large number of
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fuel, which
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hazardous for human health.
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, if a number of population start consuming locally grown
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so
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factor can be easily eradicated and human will get a healthy and reasonable price nutrients in their own locality.
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for the local farmers, earning opportunities will be enhanced due to the more consumption of locally grown nutrients. In terms of cons
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if the
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product is only available in
specific area
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a specific area
specific areas
of the world so it becomes necessary to transport it because, every person should have the right to taste
different flavors
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the different flavours
different flavours
of nourishments available on the earth.
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with, many countries are impossible for growing fruits which are only having in certain regions due to geographical and climatic reasons. Take strawberries as an example, it's
is
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been
only grown in limited countries and it is one of the
favorite
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fruit of mankind. So, people like to spend money on the purchase of
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items. In conclusion, eating locally produced
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brings both benefits and drawbacks.
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, enough
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it can harm the environment.The governing bodies should take appropriate steps in creating awareness for the consumption of locally grown
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and for the safe travel of long distance
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Carbon footprint
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Fuel consumption
  • Local economy
  • Local farmers
  • Boosts
  • Fresher produce
  • Nutritious
  • Transit
  • Seasonal eating
  • Varied diet
  • Balanced diet
  • Preserve
  • Farmland
  • Green spaces
  • Limited variety
  • Monotonous diet
  • Higher costs
  • Imported food
  • Smaller-scale production
  • Reduced economies of scale
  • Climate constraints
  • Year-round
  • Shortages
  • Natural disasters
  • Weather conditions
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