Living in a country where you have to speak a foreign language can cause serious social problems, as well as practical problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

Nowadays living abroad is becoming a typical thing and
this
is causing troubles
to
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for
these people because of the
language
barrier. These problems range from social problems to daily life problems. I believe making real friendship and even finding a
job
could be tough on
such
an environment. Real friendship implies that both parts could understand each other
in
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on
a deeper level.
This
means they share experiences of happiness as well as
sadness but
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sadness, but
without speaking the same
language
, none of them might be able to get the core of the feeling.
For instance
, when my uncle Juan began his journey of settling down in California, his girlfriend cheated on him 4 months later and left him alone. He tried to relief himself from
this
feelings but
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feeling, but
feeling but
he could not make
it he
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it, he
only spoke Spanish at that
time so
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time, so
every time that he wanted to express he failed. Personally, I find hard to explain your thoughts when you do not speak the same
language
and it could lead you to feel
loneliness
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lonely
.
Language barrier
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The language barrier
has
also
had a major role in putting away no native speakers in the journey of finding a
job
. Whereas
governments state
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governments, state
they are open to
recieve
get something; come into possession of
receive
foreigners, employers do hire people who speak fluently their
language
.
For example
, I was in Bilbao, capital of the Vasque Country,
last
year I noticed that the waitress who served me coffee speaks Euskera so I asked her if
that is
a prime requisite for a apply to a
job
there. So she answered me if you do not speak our
language
you might not get any
job
even the simplest ones like
receptionist
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a receptionist
. I feel really
challenging
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challenged
try
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trying
to finding a
job
in
some
one or some or every or all without specification
any
country where employers take for granted that everyone speak their
language
. To sum up, while there are tons of people who have settled down
overseas they
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overseas, they
might have gone through hard times
such
as
makings
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making
friends and even finding a
job
.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • linguistic proficiency
  • cross-cultural communication
  • miscommunication
  • social integration
  • linguistic alienation
  • cultural dissonance
  • language acquisition
  • communication breakdown
  • interpreter services
  • language courses
  • bilingualism
  • multilingualism
  • language barrier
  • effective communication
  • cultural assimilation
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