The best way to travel is travel in a group led by a tour guide. To what extent do you agree or disagree

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Since the beginning of
21st century
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the 21st century
more folks have started to explore attractions and remarkable sights all around the world. An opinion exists that the most convenient way of foreign culture acquaintance is through
special company
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a special company
with relevant specialization. I completely disagree with the above-mentioned statement due to the reasons described below in my essay.
Firstly
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,
agencies prepare
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agencies, prepares
agencies prepares
product with strict agenda and timetable with no opportunity to re-arrange and modify upon tourist interest.
Excursions
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Excursion
duration and rest periods are commonly created rigorously that leave low agility for a person to experience surrounding atmosphere. The same applies to eating out as dinning location and dishes are often dictated by organizers who might choose unattractive venues.
For example
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, in 2018 my mother who is fond of oil painting was compelled to visit castles and churches in Paris through organized trip.
Thus
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, inability to fully pursue our heart’s desire during the long-awaited journey might result in blurred impression and frustration.
Secondly
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, the wages of receiving party are included
at
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in
the final price and are obviously much higher than going rate that lead to less lucrative conditions for tourist. All transport services imply increased cost for a driver, petrol, parking and a potential ticket for
overspeed
spend more than available of (a budget)
overspend
that a customer cannot regulate. Cities who experience fluctuation of demand driven by
seasonality
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periods manage to harmonize budget shortage through packaged visitors.
For example
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, my sister calculated that anniversary tour to London in 2019 would cost 20% less for exact same amenities if were executed independently.
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,
budget
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the budget
oriented individuals might experience less
value
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the value
of
purchased
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purchasing
services formed by a
third
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party operator as mandatory costs are incorporated
in to
expresses motion to a point on, or within, something
into
margins. Taking into account all mentioned above, I’m convinced that the activities arranged by tour guides result to be less fascination as they usually are not financially viable and leave no room for improvisation
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • convenience
  • safety
  • organization
  • knowledgeable
  • itinerary
  • local customs
  • language barrier
  • freedom
  • flexibility
  • random
  • spontaneous
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