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Some people believe that it is better to spend more money to eliminate the cause of crime, while others think that the government should spend more on punishment. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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There are many researches and theories of crime rate in the countries and their impact on the development of the nation.
However both
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However, both
 the views have their imperative on the society and in
this
 essay, both the views will be discussed in the light of logic.
On the other hand
, many countries spend almost 20 percent of their yearly budget to lower the crimes in their country and to keep their citizens safe.Almost in every nation day by day government authorities are increasing security training, infrastructure to maintain lower corruption rate.Many nations are now trying to give a plethora of employment opportunities to their citizens which eventually helps in decreasing crimes.
Conversely
, some nations are
also
 trying to strict their laws of punishment.Dubai is considered as one of the safest countries in the world because of their strict laws and many countries are trying to follow the same.Recently, many nations are
also
 giving awareness regarding the violation and the results of the non-compliance of rules and regulations.
However many
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However, many
 opine that the government should bring some laws, training and awareness programs that will create a harmonious society for their citizens. To infer, it depends on the country situations and necessity to implement the money on breach or the punishment.
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