You are planning a vacation and you need someone to look after your cat while you are away. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter, explain why you are going away for a week describe the cat ask the neighbour if they can perform specific duties to care for the cat

Hi Claire, How are You? Hope fine!. I am writing here to ask for your help. I am going outside the city
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my home town by the coming Monday. It is my aunt's 50th wedding anniversary celebration on the 28th of March. The occasion is going to be held at Anderson Park, Dublin city centre. As an event planner, I have to go there early before
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Martin will remain in the home during that period, but I need a special contribution from you regarding Daisy, my pet cat. I would not want you to do more. Daisy is pregnant and almost at the end of her pregnancy phase. She is expected to deliver a baby soon by the end of the month. My cat needs
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diet 3 times and walks 2 times a day as it gets fat. I would like to ask could you do us a favour if there is any emergency
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to her in my absence. Because, in my opinion, men can't cope up with problems, which are mentioned above. You just have to overlook Daisy activities and meals. Hope you understand the situation and reply
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back soon. Thanks for your help in advance. Kind Regards Angela
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