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Over consuming sugar is unhealthy. Some people think that the government should take responsibility to control it. Others think that individuals should take responsibility of sugar intake. What is your opinion on this? Discuss both the views.

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The contentious argument that consumption of excess
sugar
 is harmful for our
health
 has sparked the heated debate among many. Some individuals believe that country's
health
 department must take the initiative to control it while some people have an opinion that each person in the society must take steps to have a healthy lifestyle. We need to evaluate both the perspective before we come to any conclusion. - To start with the major factor which can be most effective could be the taxation of
sugar
.
This
 wi
ll undoubtedly,
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will, undoubtedly
increase the pr
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price
f the
sugar
 as well as the sugary products which will eventually lead to the reduction in the demand of
such
 items making people adopting better lifestyle.
Moreover
, the
health
 department of a country must contribute to the organisation of fitness programs where they can emphasise more on co
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the cons
f
sugar
 intake so that people can become more aware of its harmful effects.
On the contrary
, each individual in a society must concentrate on living healthy life as obesity is one of the common
health
 issues which common people are facing irrespective of their age. Every individual should
also
 take the responsibility and must avoid over consumption of
sugar
 so that various diseases like diabetes, heart problems et
c c
continuing in the same way
etc.
an
also
 be prevented. To put it in
to a
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in
 nutshell, as I have established my viewpoints, everything goes hand in hand. If go
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the government
akes efforts to lo
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lower
own the
sugar
 intake among people, it is the responsibility of the citizens as well to take care of their
health
 by eating healthy food because at the end it is th
em w
people in general
they
ho will get benefits from their healthy lifestyle.
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