You have seen an advertisement for the post of Quality Assurance Manager at a factory. You want to apply for this job. Write a letter to the employer. In your letter: - talk about your educational background - describe your work experience and explain why you would be suitable for the job - explain why you want to work for that company.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to express my interest in your recently advertised position for a quality assurance manager. My curriculum is attached in

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letter, where it is possible to check my personal information, academic studies and experiences. I had worked as an administrator in Vancouver during 2014 and 2015 for a clothes factory, my experience there was unforgettable and I learned a lot about communication. Certainly,

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skill will help me in

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position. Nowadays, I have been working for

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superstore as a production manager and I have been working here since 2015. These years of experience make me feel more confident in what I have to do. I have many skills that will improve my capacity as a supervisor in your business. My discipline and focus will make the employees feel secure. My experience and creativity will help the business while difficult moments. My confidence will help the employees to keep doing what is needed. I would like to work in your business because it is

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to my house, I would save time and petrol to get there.

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, the salary is higher than mine in my actual position. Thank you for your consideration of my application. I look forward to

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your reply. Yours Faithfully Fernanda Valeriano

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May 13, 2020

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

9 paragraphs

215 words

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Some people fail in school, but end up being successful in life. Why do you think that is the case? What is, in your opinion, the most important thing to succeed in life?

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