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Understanding of sound events in urban scenarios based on artificial intelligence

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I am writing to express my interest to continue my studying as a Doctoral student in the field of Informatics Engineering, as it has always been my goal to become a successful researcher in
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 field. Based on the work developed during my Master’s programme and complementary activities, I intend to enhance my knowledge in modelling real and applicable systems and improve my
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 skills. While studying for my Master's
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 in the Electronics and Computer Engineering
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 the Kharazmi University, and working as a computer expert programmer, I developed a strong interest
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 the fields of signal processing, computer vision, artificial
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 learning. I believe the best way to achieve my goal in the
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 areas of signal processing, modelling and
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 learning, is by pursuing a
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Doctorate
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. Considering my previous works during my Master’s
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 in artificial
intelligence
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 in the Kharazmi University of Tehran, combined with my work experience as a skilled programmer at
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 is going to give me a step closer to my goal of becoming a successful researcher in the signal processing, artificial
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 fields. I believe that I am a strong candidate for a
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 related to audio signal processing and understanding based on my good scores in Special Topics courses where I worked on discrete time signal processing (BSc) and image processing, pattern
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 and
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 learning (MSc). I have already worked on audio processing and analysis topics
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, speech
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 and audio command detection. In the meantime, I have
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 algorithms, especially for images.
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, an area that has gained my particular attention is audio understanding, mainly due to its mathematical related nature.
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 using probabilistic approaches for stochastic process and noise modulation.
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, to be a Doctoral student in FEUP with a scholarship from FCT is an opportunity for me to enhance my skills in signal processing, artificial
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 world to make our future better because the future is not only ours. I believe my qualifications, the selected Doctorate’s programme and the scholarship from FCT are an excellent fit.

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