Going overseas for university study is an exciting prospect for many people. But while it may offer some advantages, it is probably better to stay home because of the difficulties a student inevitably encounters living and studying in a different culture. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

If someone can study abroad and she or he wants to do it,
then
I think it would be more beneficial to go abroad than stay at home. I agree with the idea that there are difficulties in a different culture, and even expense is needed to go abroad. Still, I think taking new experience can compensate all these things by giving a student valuable memory and power to be more enduring. When it comes to unfamiliar cultures, by living in a foreign country for a long time and meet many foreign friends, she or he can be familiar with it. And when it comes to the expense, by doing part time job, a student can make money by themselves. Each country has their own characters and specified college education course. Not all students can be satisfied with their curriculum of their own nation.
Instead
of attending university which teaches imperfect courses, it would be much better go abroad and study in another world.
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A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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