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Some say that people living in high-rise apartments are lonely and unhappy, while others say that it is advantageous to stay in high-rise apartments. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

#say #people #apartments
In today's world, most houses are replaced into apartments in big cities. Some people say that living in
apartments feels
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apartments, feels
 lonely and unhappy, while others say that it is advantageous to stay in high- rise apartments. Living in high rise apartments is increasing day by day because these departments are located in big cities in which all the facilities are available that a
person
 needed at the point of time. Facilities like transportation, pool in the apartment, gym, etc.
all
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All
 facilities are available that a
person
 needs. Living in apartments
of
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in
 big cities increases the standard of living. If we are going to purchase our
house it
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house, it
 will be too expensive for us as compared to apartments in which we can live in the monthly rent.
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 the paragraph by linking it to the main idea of the paragraph) It is very lonely to live in high rise apartments because there is no one to talk with. Like at home a
person
 sits with his family members and enjoys a lot. In apartments, rooms are too small which is very uncomfortable to live. It is easy to change the map of a
house but
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house, but
 it is not easy to change the map of the apartment because it is the
person
 from which you have taken an apartment on rent. While some apartments are too expensive, while it is difficult to pay monthly rent. In my opinion, living in apartments is too expensive and makes us feel lonely and unhappy. In conclusion, living in apartments have advantages and
disadvantages but
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disadvantages, but
 it is dependent on the
person
 that he is happy living in apartments or he is happy living at home. While both the options depend on the
person
 what he likes most.
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