the diagram below shows the life cycle of a lady bird and its anatomy
The diagram depicts the
life
cycle of a lady bird
and its anatomy. It is clear from the diagram that, a Correct your spelling
ladybird
ladybug
takes 30-35 days to become an adult
.
According to
what is shown above, a ladybug
goes through three phases before it become
an Change the verb form
becomes
adult
, which is
: the egg Correct subject-verb agreement
are
stage
, the larva stage
, the pupa stage
, and finally
the adult
stage
. And we can notify that the longest stage
is the larva stage
where its duration is 21 days and the shortest one is Egg
Correct article usage
the Egg
stage
.
There are eight parts in the ladybug
anatomy. Each with its own purpose, A ladybug
is an insect, a beetle actually ,and it has most of the same anatomical parts as every other insects
, Change to a singular noun
insect
as well as
a few parts that are distinctive to the ladybug
.
To sum up
, we could say that a ladybug
Change noun form
ladybug's
life
cycle is not much different from the life
cycle of a butterfly. You know what adult
ladybugs look like, but you would not even recognize them before they get to that final stage
of their life
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