In many countries, students do not want to study science subjects at university. Why is this happening? What will be the consequences of this for society?
#writing_correction38
Due to
science
subjects
do
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apply
have
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having
stimulant
for students to study Correct article usage
a stimulant
this
part of lessons in university; thus
, in most nations will be being
economic problems in society. The firstUnnecessary verb
apply
reveals
cause for not studying Wrong verb form
revealed
science
subject is shortage
tendency. Owing Correct article usage
a shortage
to
students will not have a basic security job Change preposition
apply
for
the future. TakeChange preposition
in
Add the comma(s)
,
for instance
, a recent graduated
in Change the form of the verb
graduate
this
field fail
to find their vocation. Correct subject-verb agreement
fails
Then
, it is a stronger reason to do, not focus on these subjects
. Furthermore
, that able to remarked is difficult to quite understand science
subjects
. It is, however
, necessary to
most part of skills, Change preposition
for
knowledges
and some doing on routine days. Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
Then
, if they waste the time for
learning and choosing another subject, the myriad of students are getting the best job and finding a more comfortable situation in their societies. There is ample Change preposition
apply
of
evidence that disregarded Change preposition
apply
science
subjects
influenced economic
developmentCorrect article usage
the economic
a
society. Not only does it bring economic stagnation, but it Change preposition
of a
also
depends on the other countries
. For example
, chemistry subjects
can help in making medicines and it reduces the cost of it in each country. Therefore
, not possess
notice about Wrong verb form
possessing
this
subject does have a negative point for
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on
countries
and it has a bad effect because it's becoming less youth versatile workforce related to this
job. Despite avoiding creating special opportunities in Correct article usage
the economic
economic
it likely has few economic losses. Replace the word
economy
To conclude
this
essay, is the motivational element that stopped to continue
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me
to take in
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from taking
science
subjects
in several countries
. In addition
, in most of
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apply
countries
, these Add an article
the countries
relevant
to Add a missing verb
are relevant
serious
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the serious
consequence
of Fix the agreement mistake
consequences
economy
in a society. #writing_correction38Correct article usage
the economy
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