Some people think that museums should be enjoyable places to entertain people, while others believe that the purpose of museums is to educate. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

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the past

previously utilized techniques or paintings.

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as huge guns, tanks etc...,

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presented about war and used technologies in that era.

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