The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries.

The graph below provides information about the bonus of the society aged 65 and over during the 1940 to 2020 period in 3 different territories.

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the lowest ratio of elderly people

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represented by Japan.

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the highest percentage of the latter was present in

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. In 1940 the proportion of elderly people in the USA went through many considerable fluctuations during the period from 1940 until 2040 where it estimated a gradual growth,

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compared to the beginning the USA ratio

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drastically, becoming

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2040 the territory with the lowest percentages. Some fluctuations occurred in Sweden as well,

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1940

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territory accounted

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% of

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population,

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it accomplished a markedly rose in 1980,

then

following other fluctuations until 2020, Sweden had a rapid

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increase

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becoming the

second

country with the highest chunk of those people.

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beginning

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Japan was the country that accounted

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lowest

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of these individuals.

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situation drastically changed starting from

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2020 until

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2040 years,

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sharply

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and

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fast

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occurred, making Japan the country with the highest fee