Money offered for post graduate research is limited; as a consequence, some people argue that financial support from the government should only be provided for scientific research rather than research for less useful subjects. Do you agree or disagree?

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Governments around the word are making some restrictions regarding he way they invest the money.
Therefore
, the amount of money proposed for post- graduate research is regulated and sometimes not enough to cover all of the areas that need to be developed.
As a result
the are some individuals who held the point of
view all
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view, all
of the funds provided for research should be given specifically for scientific research,
instead
supporting others type of investigations. Personally, I believe that post graduate scientific researches are
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primarily
on a development of a community, because it
potencially
with a possibility of becoming actual
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to tackling
mainly health issues,
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it must be said, that
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investigation
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quite pricey as it requires a lot of money not only for the equipment involved but
also
the work force that must be experienced and capable of
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carrying
on it. It is pointless to argue about the importance of well-being,
nevertheless
the are some other essential areas with not much information founded, to give roughly
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illustrate
illustrates
what kind of mental trauma adolescents presents after their parents got
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divorced
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examples of elemental topics that might give an insight of a problem that can be
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solved
by some investigations.
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has found
answers for our actual society is the researches carry on a laboratory. From arguments and examples given, I firmly belief that all of the recognised problems in a community can be
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tackled
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