The chart below shows the results of a survey of people who visited four types of tourist attraction in Britain in 1999. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided chart depicts the
survey's
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survey
result
of Fix the agreement mistake
results
visitors
at
four different British tourist attraction types in the year 1999.
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Overall
, it can be seen that museums and galleries as well as
Theme
Parks
have a major proportion of the total visitors
. moreover
, out of the five Theme
Parks
, Blackpool Pleasure Beach is the one that people visited the most.
The Museums And Galleries had the second
largest proportion of entire visitors
that
was 37%.Correct pronoun usage
which
Whereas
, the largest number of people visited Theme
Parks
, which accounted to be 38% of the total visitors
.The remaining small percentage of tourists chose to visit the historic houses and monuments as well as
wildlife parks
and zoos by
16% and 9% respectively.
The Blackpool Pleasure Beach had almost half, 47% of the total Change preposition
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visitors
who visited Theme
parks
, followed by Alton Towers and Pleasureland in Southport
That had 17% and 16% Theme
Park visitors
respectively.The Chessington World of Adventures and Legoland of Windsor shared 10% of them each.Submitted by shumak1144 on
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