International tourism has brought enormous benefit to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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It is a common belief that international tourism has many advantages,

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a disadvantage to affect the environment harmfully. I will briefly elaborate them supporting by advantages more than the drawbacks. In the digital age, many people prefer travelling abroad in order to visit different cultural heritage or tourist attractions. There is many positive influences on that

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place

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as financial developing, cultural bridge and

differencies

the quality of being unlike or dissimilar

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, a well-known

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center

an area that is approximately central within some larger region

centre

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is Bodrum has hosted the people who are from all around the world.

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, nobody has never bothered or discussed them religion, political sides, what kind of the society. All these human have transformed an open-minded and

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characterized by or given to yielding to the wishes of someone

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neighbour.

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, some residents feel more uncomfortable around the strangers.

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, over the years the people

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have adapted

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relaxed

relaxing

, and more

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put up with something or somebody unpleasant

tolerated

tolerant

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, the visitors have some responsibilities to across the local habitats. They never have thought before to damage the environment because of their visiting. Due to plan to spend their

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, they are consciously about the special species which one should

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protect

by the authorities.

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, they can create an awareness internationally to prevent to proliferate endemic plants, and animals. In Bodrum town, the foreign people have started a company, for saving a value flower named as Bodrum Choros. In conclusion, I restate that there are more advantages to organize and join a global holiday.

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the psychological result of perception and learning and reasoning

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about national culture and endemic species

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is getting

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has gotten

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spread

all around the world.

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, it changes to a better option for the every citizen who is a participant of the small world.

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Topic Vocabulary:

enormous benefit
impact
local inhabitants
environment
disadvantages
outweigh
advantages
economic benefits
job creation
cultural exchange
infrastructure development
promotion
local products
environmental impact
exploitation
resources
cultural erosion
increased cost of living
overcrowding
congestion
balancing
benefits
disadvantages

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