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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realised you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - thank your friend for the holiday - explain that you left your wallet in their house - give them instructions on how to send it back to you

#week #friend #holiday #home #wallet #house #instructions
Dear Johan, How are you? Hope everything is fine!. It's been
great
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a great
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 time we spent on holiday
last
 week at your residence. I never forget those days, enjoying disco parties at late night and eating street food near the Santa Cruz beach. I will definitely plan again to come back in
next
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the next
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vacations
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vacation
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. My friend when I came back home and searched my wallet I didn't get anywhere. I believe it is left by
mistaken
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 at your home. I remember, when I paid to delivery boy and put my wallet on your fridge. As it contains all personal belongings like
Driving
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 license, ATM card, ID proof, without them I cannot even withdraw money and
unable
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am unable
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 to drive my car. I am unable to come
their
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there
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 due to my busy office schedule. So, now please do one favour for me and send my documents
at
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 my address 9/4, Boston street, New York through the government registry service as it is a safe mode of transport. I will pay the amount as soon as I get my wallet. I hope you understand my situation and waiting for a response from you soon. Your lovely friend Rahul
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • memorable
  • grateful
  • remarkable
  • incident
  • essential
  • postage
  • courier
  • identification
  • reimburse
  • parcel
  • delivery method
  • anticipate
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