Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?
The world is moving and changing very fast. There are a lot of problems, which most of the countries will have to face in the future. The most important issues are related to the environment, overpopulation and education. My country will
also
face those problems in the next
decade. In my opinion, the environmental degradation and educational problems are the biggest challenge for Poland.
To begin
with, the most threatening problem
that will increase, if the proper measure will not be taken, is pollution. For a few years Poland has been fighting against smog in Suggestion
problems
the biggest
cities Suggestion
the big
the bigger
such
as Cracow or Warsaw. There is a lot of pollution, due to too much traffic, for
example in
Cracow everyday many people Accept comma addition
example, in
use
cars as a method of transportation. Suggestion
uses
Moreover
, in Poland during heating season most houses use
a low quality coal. Although
, the Polish government has already taken steps to reduce pollution, it needs to be done more. For
example
, they could introduce a total ban of coal use
as a source of heating. The other thing, that should be done is to encourage people to use
public communication or bike instead
of cars. For
example
, in the historical centres of big cities it shouldn't be allowed to use
and park cars.
On the other hand
, there is the educational system in Poland, which in my opinion, will get worse in the next
years. Nowadays, everyone can attend to school, in my country, most of the schools are public, which gives equal opportunities to children from poor and wealthy families. However
, the problem starts in college education, since some time, almost everyone can get to
the universities, no matter of interests or exam results. Suggestion
into
For instance
, universities in Poland do not challenge their students, they don't demand enough. For
example
, even students who don't attend classes or do not have enough knowledge pass their exams. This
problem can be overcome by raising the level of education in universities, and require more from students.
In conclusion, there is no doubt that the coming decade will be challenging for many countries, Poland included. However environmental
and educational issues in Poland can be solved by introducing certain restriction.Accept comma addition
However, environmental
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