Countries around the world will be facing significant challenges relating not only to the environment, but population and education as well. What problems will your country face in the next ten years? How can these problems be overcome?

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The world is moving and changing very fast. There are a lot of problems, which most of the countries will have to face in the future. The most important issues are related to the environment, overpopulation and education. My country will
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face those problems in the
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decade. In my opinion, the environmental degradation and educational problems are the biggest challenge for Poland.
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with, the most threatening
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that will increase, if the proper measure will not be taken, is pollution. For a few years Poland has been fighting against smog in
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the big
the bigger
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as Cracow or Warsaw. There is a lot of pollution, due to too much traffic,
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Cracow everyday many people
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cars as a method of transportation.
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, in Poland during heating season most houses
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a low quality coal.
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, the Polish government has already taken steps to reduce pollution, it needs to be done more.
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, they could introduce a total ban of coal
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as a source of heating. The other thing, that should be done is to encourage people to
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public communication or bike
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of cars.
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, in the historical centres of big cities it shouldn't be allowed to
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and park cars.
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, there is the educational system in Poland, which in my opinion, will get worse in the
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years. Nowadays, everyone can attend to school, in my country, most of the schools are public, which gives equal opportunities to children from poor and wealthy families.
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, the problem starts in college education, since some time, almost everyone can get
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the universities, no matter of interests or exam results.
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, universities in Poland do not challenge their students, they don't demand enough.
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, even students who don't attend classes or do not have enough knowledge pass their exams.
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problem can be overcome by raising the level of education in universities, and require more from students. In conclusion, there is no doubt that the coming decade will be challenging for many countries, Poland included.
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However environmental
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However, environmental
and educational issues in Poland can be solved by introducing certain restriction.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Sustainability
  • Ecosystem
  • Renewable resources
  • Urbanization
  • Demographics
  • Healthcare system
  • Pension crisis
  • Curriculum development
  • Digital literacy
  • E-learning platforms
  • Lifelong learning
  • Public policy
  • Biodiversity conservation
  • Green technology
  • Population density
  • Generational equity
  • Economic disparity
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