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The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustrated diagram shows information about two different rooms for Australian University Students.
One
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room
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 is for the accommodation for two people, whereas, another
one
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 is for a single student. Overall
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it's observed that the
room
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 for two students has a larger width than the other
one
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, as well as some extra objects.Apart from that, it's rent is more than the other
one
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. The amount to be paid per week for the bigger
room
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 is $350 a week, whereas, smaller
one
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 costs only 200$.Each of those have a bed, a study desk, a TV, a bathroom and a kitchen that includes a stove, a sink and a microwave, having the same layout.
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However larger
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However, larger
room
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 has an extra bed and study desk along with a table, chairs, 2 cupboards and a shelf. Considering the size of the
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, the length of both the rooms is same,
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 6 meters.
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,
one
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 of the rooms's breadth of 4 meters, whereas other's is only 2.5 meters
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