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The plans below show a student room for two people and a student room for one person at an Australian university. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

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The illustrated diagram shows information about two different rooms for Australian University Students.
One
room
 is for the accommodation for two people, whereas, another
one
 is for a single student. Overall
,
Accept space
,
it's observed that the
room
 for two students has a larger width than the other
one
, as well as some extra objects.Apart from that, it's rent is more than the other
one
. The amount to be paid per week for the bigger
room
 is $350 a week, whereas, smaller
one
 costs only 200$.Each of those have a bed, a study desk, a TV, a bathroom and a kitchen that includes a stove, a sink and a microwave, having the same layout.
However larger
Accept comma addition
However, larger
room
 has an extra bed and study desk along with a table, chairs, 2 cupboards and a shelf. Considering the size of the
room
, the length of both the rooms is same,
that is
 6 meters.
However
,
one
 of the rooms's breadth of 4 meters, whereas other's is only 2.5 meters
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